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This story takes place in Forks,
Bella is 12 yrs old, she moved to Forks when she was 10

At the age of 7 Bella was kidnapped, she was found after 2wks, of searching, nobody knows what happened in thoughts, 2wks her kidnappers were never found and Bella never speaks a word to anybody about it, She just deals with her problems by eating, she is now very over weight and has a very low self esteem.

Bella's mother and father separated 12mths after she was kidnapped,Renee her mother could not handle the stress of her daughter not talking about what happened, so Bella lives with her father charlie, Renee lives in Australia and is very rich.

Bella's best friend is Edward, who Bella is madly head over heels in love with as well as every other girl in forks, Edward is very protective of Bella and is always sticking up for her when the other kids at school tease her, Bella doesn't really understands why Edward is like this, but never questions his motives, but when a new girl arrives at forks things change, everything starts to take a dramatic turn for Bella and life as she knows it, just isn't the same,



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hope you like the new chapter
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should l continue or not

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i love this story it really hits home ta me big time i comfort eat alot cuz of my weight and just really bad people putting me dwn :(

but any how your story is amazin continue on and post mre really sonn darlin !!!!!

~jill~

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love it keep me updated : )

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Great job. It was an intense chapter and like Heather I am looking forward to hearing the explanation of what hppened to Bella with the man involved. Comfort eating is such an easy thing to get into - I think we are all guilty of that at some point. Keep writing definitely - you have us curious to know what happens next
Cheers
Michelle

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I really luv dis story. Ur descriptions and just the way u write things really brings maning to the story. I can't wait 2 read more. Could u update me?

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Thanks Fatima
for your lovely comment and l will keep you updated

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WOW GREAT STORY
write more soon...

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It is amazing what four months can do to a person. l can say my life officially sucks. l am unhappy, l don't get much sleep due to the constant flash backs of when l was kidnapped and my mental state is like a pressure cooker with the lid screwed shut, at any minute it will blow. l have no one to talk to or confide in only my food is my savior .. My friendship with Edward has changed, we are no longer as close as we use to be. We are two very different people, l am fat, ugly and very uncoordinated. Edward on the other hand is absolutely gorgeous. All the guys idolize him and all the girls dream of walking down the Aile to him , including me.

As my father pulled up to the curve at school, l suddenly felt like l was going to throw up, l hated this place, it was like my own personal hell. all l wanted to do was retreat back to my safe, comfortable bedroom, at least there l was free from the bully Tanya.

Tanya moved here three weeks ago, she is so pretty. l think Edward really likes her, l can tell by the way he looks at her. But Tanya isn't who she makes herself out to be. She has everybody believing that she is a really nice, sweet and considerate person, but in actually fact she is quiet the opposite. Tanya loathes me, bullying me pushing and shoving at me when nobody is looking or able to hear, especially Edward. Tanya has Edward completely blinded, he is dazzled by her little charade, if only he would take better notice than he would truly see her, for what she is.

While l headed towards my locker, l kept my eyes down, hoping and praying that l would not run into Tanya. But like most mornings, when l reached my locker, l was greeted by Tanya, but today Edward was with her and to my utter disgust he had his arm around her, Tanya was looking at me with a very fake smile.

'hi lzzy , how are you this wonderful morning ' Edward said he seemed to be very happy today, l'm guessing it had something to do with him having his arm around Tanya. l can actually say l was psst and as jealous as hell, but what chance did l have, getting Edward to like me. l was just the really fat kid that everybody thought ate to much ahhhhh l think l need to go get a mars bar no make that 2.

l looked up and give Edward a quick smile, as a reply to his hello, l was way to emotional to talk right now. Tanya then started to gabble on about girlie crap as though we were BFF , of course it was all for Edwards benefit, l couldn't even tell you what she was talking about, l just switched off.

Edward brought me back to reality by asked me, why l was being so mean to Tanya. At first l didn't answer. l was in shock, l could not believe what l was hearing, did he really just ask me why l was being mean to Tanya. l looked up to meet his gaze, only to see the smile that was there only minutes ago was now gone and he was frowning at me, Tanya quickly took this opportunity to play her drama role, so she pulled away from Edwards embrace and YELLED

'why is she so mean, I've only ever been nice to her' then she ran off faking a cry, which l must say was very convincing.Edward just glared at me words can't describe, how angry he looked. Right at that moment something inside of me snapped. The hairs on the back of my neck stood up, goose pimples rose on my arms, my mouth went dry and l froze with fear. my eyes darted around for an escape, l had to escape, l couldn't breath......................so l took off towards the toilets.

When l reached the toilets l ran in, but l was taken by surprise when l felt two hands on my back before l had a chance to see who they belonged to . They gave me a push that sent me staggering and at the same time l heard a fimiliar voice
'fatty' l turned around to see Tanya.

There is, l found a limit to the amount of bullying you are prepared to take. There is an end to fear. There is the start of anger.

My anger started as a tiny spark the day Tanya showed her true colors to me. It took 3 weeks to turn into a flame. And now it has l am know longer afraid . Tanya is going down. l flew across the floor and punched her right in the face. she let out a scream and grabbed her face and ran from the toilets ha l sure showed her. l went over to the basin and washed my hands, but l jumped when l felt a strong grip on my arm l let out a blood curdling scream, l looked up to see that it was Edward, what was he doing in the girls toilets. He looked really worried and concerned, which confused me, l was sure he would be psst with me for punching Tanya.

'GO AWAY EDWARD 'l yelled l couldn't bear to have him near me, he tried to touch me, but l pulled away. he started to come closer, but as he did l started to panic, l could almost feel the walls of the school closing in on me, l threw myself against one of the walls and slid down to the floor grabbing my legs and bringing them to my chest as tight as they would go. l tucked my head down into my knees and started to rock backwards and forwards. l heard someone enter the toilets and whisper something to Edward. They left and Edward walked over and kneeled down to me and said

'After today you and me are no longer friends, you don't exist' then he walked out and left me

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well l hope you all like this chapter
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why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????????????????????????????
why???????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edward!! TANYA's a meanie!!!!!! you're bella's only friend!!! how could you do that to her?!


PLEASE POST MORE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I NEED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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well then edward after today...me and..................tanya are not friends how do you like that haha :L love it

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Why couldn't Edward walk in 5 minutes earlier? He's being a jerk! I h8 Tanya so much! Can't she disappear? UGH!


Tom is dancing to Girlfriend by Avril Lavigne. LOL.

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