The Twilight Saga

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This story takes place in Forks,
Bella is 12 yrs old, she moved to Forks when she was 10

At the age of 7 Bella was kidnapped, she was found after 2wks, of searching, nobody knows what happened in thoughts, 2wks her kidnappers were never found and Bella never speaks a word to anybody about it, She just deals with her problems by eating, she is now very over weight and has a very low self esteem.

Bella's mother and father separated 12mths after she was kidnapped,Renee her mother could not handle the stress of her daughter not talking about what happened, so Bella lives with her father charlie, Renee lives in Australia and is very rich.

Bella's best friend is Edward, who Bella is madly head over heels in love with as well as every other girl in forks, Edward is very protective of Bella and is always sticking up for her when the other kids at school tease her, Bella doesn't really understands why Edward is like this, but never questions his motives, but when a new girl arrives at forks things change, everything starts to take a dramatic turn for Bella and life as she knows it, just isn't the same,



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nice!! keep writing!! i love the story but look after some words coz they're not spelled correctly..

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love it plz plz plz post more and add me

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Hiya,

Great chapter! You have shown our Edward to be just the loveliest guy and I love that. He is so protective and such a good friend. I loved the Jessica bit as well - I can so imagine her doing that. hehe.
Keep up the good work. If you need me too I can look over your chapters before they are posted to check the spelling, paragraphs, etc because the story is fantastic!

By the way I was thinking about the reply business you asked me about. I find that if I am trying to reply on my ipod touch it won't let me but it does on my computer. Maybe you need to change where you are replying from?? Just a thought.

Can not wait until the next chapter because I love how different this story is!
Cheers
Michelle

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love it

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i loved it post some more soon plz

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Thanks for all the lovely comments
l will post again soon!!!!

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YEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE HIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!

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As soon as Edward had left, dad called for me to come down for dinner , we sat in silence as we ate, once l was done l left the table said goodnight, had a shower and went to sleep

When my eyes closed , my mind was invaded by nightmares, of when l was seven, l was in a small dimly lit room, it smelt of damp earth and of stale beer, there was a man, walking towards me, l squinted straining my eyes to see, but as he came closer l saw, his eyes blazing and fists clenched. l jumped up and started to run. l had no idea were l was running to, as l stumbelled over things, scrambelling to get away. l found sum stairs, and ran up them tripping as l went, when l reached the top, l quickly looked around for somewhere, anywhere to hide. l saw a door and ran towards it and opened it, l shut it behind me and put my back up against it, hoping in my childlike innocents that l would be able to stop this strange man from comming in.

l could hear his footsteps and heavy breathing getting closer, suddenly everything goes dead quiet and then l hear the door handle squeek in defience as it is pushed down, l brace myself and start to pray, l can feel him trying to open the door, but he can't do it as l am pushing with all my strength against it, suddenly he throughs all his weight into it . My weight is no match for him and he sends me flying into the middle of the room , falling into a heap on to the hard wooden floor , as the man from down stairs crashes through the open door.

l look at him in horror, l see in his eyes that he is really mad. l have no idea why or what l have done to make this strange man so angry, but all l know is that l need to get away from him. l pull myself off the floor and run into the furtherest corner of the room, crouching down as low and as far away from him as possible, instinctively curling up into a tight protecive ball. l was so scared, l wet my self, l didn't know what to do.

He comes across the room, and l let out a little quiver of fear, he leans over me ,his eyes raging, and slowly inches toward me.

' think you can get away from me,' he spits, l don't say anything, l was frozen with fear

'answer me' he yells anger driping from every word he says

'no' l say in a shaky voice, not daring to look at him

'l'm going to teach you a lesson' he spat through his clenched teeth

Thats when l felt his fist crashing down on my arm, l let out a cry of pain, but he didn't stop, if anything it made him, angrier, he continued to beat me and when l thought l could'nt bear anymore, l woke up.

my p'j's were ringing wet from sweat, so l quickly changed them and made my way downstairs to the kitchen, l grabbed 2 packets of chips, 4 packets of tiny teddies, 2 mars bars, 2 packets of tim tams , 2litres of milk and then headed to the lounge room to watch T.V and drown my bad memories, with eating my lovely food.

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i have to say that i comfort ate because of me getting bullied but it made it worse i have lost the waight know so i must say im blessed while those girls got buy on there looks and there bullying. i would do my homework and pass my exsams. im not vain but they losst the reason to make fun of me know im the biggger person (but not in the same sense) :) i love your story and if i were in bellas shoes 2 years ago i would have done the same thing

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Soo sad..Poor Bella..=(

Keep writing!

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aww... poor bella :(

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So sad!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Bella!!!!!!!!!!

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