The Twilight Saga

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This story takes place in Forks,
Bella is 12 yrs old, she moved to Forks when she was 10

At the age of 7 Bella was kidnapped, she was found after 2wks, of searching, nobody knows what happened in thoughts, 2wks her kidnappers were never found and Bella never speaks a word to anybody about it, She just deals with her problems by eating, she is now very over weight and has a very low self esteem.

Bella's mother and father separated 12mths after she was kidnapped,Renee her mother could not handle the stress of her daughter not talking about what happened, so Bella lives with her father charlie, Renee lives in Australia and is very rich.

Bella's best friend is Edward, who Bella is madly head over heels in love with as well as every other girl in forks, Edward is very protective of Bella and is always sticking up for her when the other kids at school tease her, Bella doesn't really understands why Edward is like this, but never questions his motives, but when a new girl arrives at forks things change, everything starts to take a dramatic turn for Bella and life as she knows it, just isn't the same,



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Rachel Hope
Glad you liked it [smiles and blushes]

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WOW THIS IS REALLY GOOD I HADNT HAD A CHANCE TO READ IT AND NOW THAT I HAVE I LOVED IT!
YOU ARE REALLY TALENTED IN WRITTING! KEEP UP ALL THE GOOD PROGRESS!

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Hi Claudia Dela Cruz
l'm so glad you liked it,
you are my most loyal fan of CLOSING YOUR SOUL and it means a lot to me that you took the time to read this story so thank you, and your comment has really brightened my day and brought a smile to my face, you even made me blush
lol Bells

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Awesomeness!!!

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Thanks Switzerland Babe

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GREAT keep writting but just make her skinnier

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Munazil Thanks for the comment
Bella will eventually get thinner all in good time

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Ah see what I get for not checking in on your story enough, lots of chapters to read. I feel sad for Edward, he doesn't know where Izy is or if she's coming back but at the same time getting his sweet revenge on Tonya. Can't wait to read that one. And then Izy going to God knows where, being put through God knows what to make her stronger. The tatoo's are cute and a good resemblance of what they are now, I'd be opposed but I can't. I have four of my own. It will be interesting to read what they go through in their training and how everything turns out.

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this is awesome.. *smiles*

i like it.. lol

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love it sorry i haven't been reading lately but im back again. and i love it.can't wait to hear all about this new boot camp thingy they're at!

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that was sooo good i cant wait for more keep me posted

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Making my way to my locker l felt a hand grab my butt and give it a squeeze, l new straight away that it was Tanya, she just can't help herself

'hi there sexy ' she slobbers in my ear, then grabs it with her teeth and gives it a little nibble, l think l'm going to be sick!!.

l turn and plaster a fake smile on my face and say

'hi there yourself,' then l let my eyes roam over her body, making it obvious for her to see, l then frown and take a step back and say

'sweety did you check yourself out before leaving the house this morning, cause that outfit really does not look good on you ,don't get me wrong l usally love everyhing that you wear but this' l say using one of my hands and waving it up and down in front of her body

' kind of makes you look fat, not that you are, your gorgeous in my eyes no matter what, cause l love you' [cough cough ] yea right but she doesn't know that.

' l just don't want other people judging you' then l thought l would pull her in for a hug, it would seem more dramatic and it would make her feel as though a really cared, AS IF. She pulled away really quickly and looked at me with a really concerned look on her face then she said in a really frantic and worried voice

'do you think l have time to go home and change, do you think anybody has noticed already? ' she ran her hands up and down her barely there dress, trying to smooth any creases out, l could see she was feeling very uncomfortable and self conscious, so l pulled her towards the drama room which l new nobody would be in a this time of day.

Once we got there l thought how easy this girl was to manipulate and play with, my plan of revenge was going to be a lot easier and so much swetter than l could ever imagined it will even make sugar seem salty once l'm finished ha ha ha.

Tanya looked at me with a questioning look on her face but l just gave her a smile and said

'sweaty you don't have time to go home but l'm sure there's something in here we could borrow, that might just help and someone as sexy and irresistible as you can pull anything off so STAY' l said putting my hands up in a stop position so she would not move. Then l took of in the direction to were they store there costumes, ahhhhhhhh this is going to be PRICELESS.

While l was looking through the strange and bizarre costumes, l came across two ideal pieces of clothing one was a dirty gray pair of tracksuit pants with a few small wholes in them and the other was a bright yellow jumper with a big smiley face on it 'PERFECT'. l giggled to my self while walking back to Tanya, l couldn't wait to see her face when she finds out what l have for her to wear, this payback sh*t is kind of fun ha ha ha

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